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Subject: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Wed Mar 14, 2012 4:29 pm
The Crowd Boo's as they see Jason Rogue come out from backstage, Jason look's pissed off, Closing his Fist, He walks down the ramp looking at the fans with a Disgusting look on his face. He goes over to ring side and takes the microphone out of the ring announcers hand with aggression, he then enters the ring and puts the microphone next to his lips and starts talking
Jason Rogue WHAT THE FUCK IT THIS? I don't even have a match for 2 week strait?, i ask for a match at Barbed Consequences and Damon Moore denies me? I came to this company to compete, not to sit backstage and watch a bunch of fake, untalented, wrestlers that don't even deserve to be here. I came a long way to just watch wrestling matches? hell no, I demand i match and if i don't get one ... then someones going to have to pay.
He looks at the fan's, some laughing at his anger.He exits the ring and walks over to a fan that is wearing "JASON ROGUE SUCKS" T-shirt, as he approaches the fan, The fan starts laughing
Jason Rogue You think it's funny? You think i'm a Joke? i will kick your ass if you don't sit you skinny red neck ass down. You want to hit me? take your shot bitch?
The Fan starts laughing at Jason, He then slaps Jason across the face, Jason tilt's his head and smiles, He then grabs the fan and trows him to ringside and starts hitting him with Left and Rights. He picks the fan up and takes him inside the ring where he wait's like a Viper attacking his prey, he applies the Fujiwara Armbreaker, Jason's eyes go to the back of his head, security trying to get him off the fan, but he just wont let go. after 5 minutes he lets go and lifts up the fan and goes for his Finisher "Final Outage", the Fans lays in the ring twitching, He smiles and picks up the microphone laying on the ground and starts speaking
Jason Rogue Idiots backstage that won't give me a match.... that is whats going to happen to these fans every time i don't get a match you will watch innocent people get hurt. But if you give me a match at Adrenaline, not only a typical match i want it to be a main event match I will not harm a single fan ever again?. You better come out here now because i don't have all day, or else someone else in the crowd is going to pay the price
He waits for the GM to come out, Medics outside attending to the fan
TBC BY GM OF ADRENALINE !
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Wed Mar 14, 2012 4:50 pm
''Master Of Puppies'' by Metallica blares over the PA, as Jordan Ainsworth makes his way down to ringside, accompanied by several bodyguards. One of his bodyguards walks over to the annouce table, and grabs a microphone, before making his way back to Ainsworth and giving it to him. Ainsworth takes the microphone, as he, surrounded by six bodyguards, make their way to the ring. Two of the body guards enter the ring first, the other two hold down the ropes, as Ainsworth enters the ring. Ainsworth looks to the fans and smiles. The fans don't react, not knowing who he is.
Jordan Ainsworth - Oh yeah! Now, THIS is what I'm talking about. Did you just see that, ladies and gentlemen? Jason Rogue! *The fans boo*. Haha, yeah I know, I can't stand him either. You two, go help this poor sap.
Jordan Ainsworth beckons for two of the bodyguards to call for the paramedics. Two paramedics, followed by a AWO official run down to the ring, and check up on the injured man's condition, before carrying him out on a stretcher.
Jordan Ainsworth - Right. First off, I better introduce myself. My name is Jordan Ainsworth. I was a former profesional wrestler, albeit not a very successful one, haha. But anyway, I'm here as the new General Manager of Adrenaline, which takes place on Saturday nights. I've got big plans for Adrenaline. Very big plans. Mr. Damon Moore probably won't like me saying this, but I'll say it anyways. Adrenaline is gonna be bigger then Fusion soon, and Rogue, I'm giving you one hell of a opportunity. You want to be in the main event of the FIRST ever Adrenaline show? Well, you got it. And your opponent? Well, you'll find out soon. But let me tell you this. Your mystery opponent is DYING to face you.
''Master Of Puppets'' by Metallica blares over the PA again, as he leaves the ring, accompanied by his six bodyguards. The fans begin to ask Ainsworth questions, but he simply ignores them and tells them to have patience.
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Wed Mar 14, 2012 8:12 pm
Sorry to interrupt the promos here, but I would just like to say something about your promos to help you improve.
"Management.... that is whats going to happen to these fans every time i don;t get a match so you ether watch innocent people get hurt. Or you give me a match at Adrenaline, not only a typical match i want it to be a main event match."
First off, that many periods is too much. I know it's not that big of a deal, but just two of them would be better than 4. In this case, a comma would work much better. You also put a period in the wrong place. You gotta watch out for things like that.
Also, make sure you are capitalizing the right letters in your words. If you notice, your "I" isn't capitalized.
Punctuation is also a huge part of promos and I see a lot of problems with them. In your promo there was a few. Maybe it was an accident because the keys are next to each other, but you should still check it to make sure. You should have an apostrophe in the word "don't".
After fixing those errors, the selected sentences should look a little something like this:
"Management, that is what's going to happen to these fans every time I don't get a match, so you either watch innocent people get hurt, or you give me a match at Adrenaline. Not just a typical match. I want it to be a Main Event match."
It's always the little things that people mess up on. You never know if it's just an accident, typing fast, or just careless writing. You should always go back over your writing and edit anything that's needed. I figured I would put this since you put the poll up and I saw those problems. I hope this helps you out with future promos. Feel free to post feedback on my promos whenever you want.
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Wed Mar 14, 2012 8:33 pm
Jacob Steele wrote:
Sorry to interrupt the promos here, but I would just like to say something about your promos to help you improve.
"Management.... that is whats going to happen to these fans every time i don;t get a match so you ether watch innocent people get hurt. Or you give me a match at Adrenaline, not only a typical match i want it to be a main event match."
First off, that many periods is too much. I know it's not that big of a deal, but just two of them would be better than 4. In this case, a comma would work much better. You also put a period in the wrong place. You gotta watch out for things like that.
Also, make sure you are capitalizing the right letters in your words. If you notice, your "I" isn't capitalized.
Punctuation is also a huge part of promos and I see a lot of problems with them. In your promo there was a few. Maybe it was an accident because the keys are next to each other, but you should still check it to make sure. You should have an apostrophe in the word "don't".
After fixing those errors, the selected sentences should look a little something like this:
"Management, that is what's going to happen to these fans every time I don't get a match, so you either watch innocent people get hurt, or you give me a match at Adrenaline. Not just a typical match. I want it to be a Main Event match."
It's always the little things that people mess up on. You never know if it's just an accident, typing fast, or just careless writing. You should always go back over your writing and edit anything that's needed. I figured I would put this since you put the poll up and I saw those problems. I hope this helps you out with future promos. Feel free to post feedback on my promos whenever you want.
Actually, neither two nor four periods is right; three periods would be the grammatically correct way to type it. It's actually a punctuation symbol, called an ellipsis.
Also, I would fix the sentence, but "management... that's what's going to happen to these fans" makes no sense at all whatsoever. Management is a noun, it can't happen to things.
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Wed Mar 14, 2012 9:11 pm
Phillip Phillips wrote:
Also, I would fix the sentence, but "management... that's what's going to happen to these fans" makes no sense at all whatsoever. Management is a noun, it can't happen to things.
I totally agree with this. This is the kind of sentences that could cost you points when you're in a RP match. You could've use "Management, you see this? This is what's going to bla bla bla" just take the advices these guys gave you and you'll improve a lot
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Wed Mar 14, 2012 10:31 pm
Okay I was thinking about this for a while but I might as well say it now . I sorta like your promo but I would like it a whole lot more if you didn't remind me too much of Randy Reamue . If this is your gimmick then I think that you ripped off Randy and it's kinda ironic when you joke or insult Randy's promos or character when you're doing something exactly the same thing or similar as him . Cause if you pay attention to his promos he complains about management and all that good stuff . He even says it on Laurence's AWO View .
Just Keepin it real .
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Wed Mar 14, 2012 10:54 pm
Phillip Phillips wrote:
Also, I would fix the sentence, but "management... that's what's going to happen to these fans" makes no sense at all whatsoever. Management is a noun, it can't happen to things.
Yeah, I completely agree. And you're right, my bad.
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Thu Mar 15, 2012 12:42 am
lol i know that i'm doing this wrong i'm not a idiot .. plus i hate Jason rogue (as a character) so i don't give a fuck what i say or misspell in his promos you don't like it DEAL WITH IT :(TROLLFACE):
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Thu Mar 15, 2012 12:45 am
Tevon Hunter wrote:
Okay I was thinking about this for a while but I might as well say it now . I sorta like your promo but I would like it a whole lot more if you didn't remind me too much of Randy Reamue . If this is your gimmick then I think that you ripped off Randy and it's kinda ironic when you joke or insult Randy's promos or character when you're doing something exactly the same thing or similar as him . Cause if you pay attention to his promos he complains about management and all that good stuff . He even says it on Laurence's AWO View .
Just Keepin it real .
LMAO it's not a gimmick lolz it's just character plus why do i want to steal some lame ass gimmick?
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Thu Mar 15, 2012 12:47 am
You people are Correction Nazis :(BITCHPLASE):
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Thu Mar 15, 2012 12:56 am
There i fixed my promo Happy? ohh and btw thx for the advise i guess?
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Thu Mar 15, 2012 1:04 am
why did you need to post so many times?
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Thu Mar 15, 2012 1:21 am
and this is 1 half of adrenalines main event. Good luck Roy
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Thu Mar 15, 2012 9:21 am
What happened to "no commenting on promos" guys? Because if that rule is dead, I'm going to link to lemon party on all future promos.
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Thu Mar 15, 2012 10:04 am
You honestly don't have to be hateful about it. We're just trying to help.
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Thu Mar 15, 2012 10:45 am
Jacob Steele wrote:
You honestly don't have to be hateful about it. We're just trying to help.
Maybe "Spin me right round" instead. With a nice side of cianti.
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Thu Mar 15, 2012 1:07 pm
Cole Walker wrote:
why did you need to post so many times?
Because .... I can :(BITCHPLASE):
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Thu Mar 15, 2012 1:08 pm
Cole Scorpio wrote:
What happened to "no commenting on promos" guys? Because if that rule is dead, I'm going to link to lemon party on all future promos.
LMAO !!
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Thu Mar 15, 2012 1:08 pm
Jacob Steele wrote:
You honestly don't have to be hateful about it. We're just trying to help.
Jacob lol i said thanks lol
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Thu Mar 15, 2012 1:49 pm
can you not just put all these posts into one Marcos?
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Thu Mar 15, 2012 1:50 pm
Nope :(TROLLFACE):
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Thu Mar 15, 2012 5:14 pm
Jason Rogue wrote:
lol i know that i'm doing this wrong i'm not a idiot .. plus i hate Jason rogue (as a character) so i don't give a fuck what i say or misspell in his promos you don't like it DEAL WITH IT :(TROLLFACE:(
Then why do you use him?
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Thu Mar 15, 2012 6:26 pm
Because he was the first thing that came to my mind lol
i would of changed it but then people would be on my dick about it (Not saying Tre will) but ye.
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Subject: Re: No Match? what kind of bullshit is this? Thu Mar 15, 2012 6:28 pm
I mean you've had 5 characters here already...None of them have been that successful so I really don't get it
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